When birds up in the vastness of blue,
sing the notes of octaves oblivious to you;
When the sun shining high above,
draws a blanket of its sunshine trove;
When the mists on the green grass,
embrace the feet treading across;
When the splashes of first monsoon rain,
awash the dreariness of a worked up brain;
When the sight of a beautiful smile,
helps you walk an extra mile;
When the caress of hands pure,
makes you forget the nasty rebukes of life sour;
When the practice of a long forgotten passion,
reinstates your cheekbones into motion;
When the fire of a dream to fly,
doesn't let the desire to dry;
Oh you beautiful species,
Wandering in three dimensions,
Looking for the impeccable melody,
Stop! Find yourself instead,
Amidst the deluge;
And then interrogate!
Amidst the deluge;
And then interrogate!
Aren't you happy?
Awesomely well captured. A true canvas of hope!!
ReplyDeleteThankyou Sayantan :)
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ReplyDeleteRelieving.. feeling good
Thankyouu Shiva. That was the motive of this piece :)
DeleteWonderful piece! Keep writing 😃
ReplyDeleteThanks Pooo :*
DeleteLovely piece, AU :) :)
ReplyDeleteThanks ND. Glad that you liked it. And your constant praises help me to write better :)
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ReplyDeleteCaptivating and a treat to read :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Snigdha! Let us make this world a beautiful place to live in :)
DeleteProud of you....
ReplyDeletehahha thank youuu papa :D
DeleteProud of you....
ReplyDeleteWhen the lines of a beautiful poem makes you ponder again and again .. then you are happy !!!
ReplyDeleteInspiring and thought provoking 😊
Thanks a lot Manoj :) :) I am glad you liked it.
DeleteAnother beautiful piece by you, Ananya
ReplyDeleteMakes me happy, while I read this ☺
Thank you Eesha di..means a lot when you say that :)
DeleteNice. Stavya liked it too.
ReplyDeleteHahahhaa :D Thank you Bhabhi/Tunnu bhaiya :D
DeleteNice. Stavya liked it too.
ReplyDeleteVery well written. Feeling happy after reading this. :)
ReplyDeletewow superb! sole intention of this piece to make this world a happier place :D
DeleteGood one AU :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Pragathesh :)
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